Essay Revising

A piece of perfect essay is the key step towards your dream school.

Native Tutors

Dino S

Essay Tutor

Major in International Business, New York University
Served as the head and analyst of large real estate projects in the United States
Skilled in essay writing in Business and Data Analysis

Rachel L

Essay Tutor

MA in Creative Writing, Columbia University
Served as Assistant to Chief Editor at New York Times
Skilled in datamining on student’s background and creating personalized application stories

Sonia A

Essay Tutor

Major in Social Sciences, New York University
Served as Writing Tutor at Writing Centre of New York University
Skilled in datamining on student’s background and creating personalized application stories

Nicole K

Essay Tutor

Major in History, University of Pennsylvania
Served as HR Assistant at The Museum of Modern Art
Skilled in essay writing in Social Science

Zoe F

Essay Tutor

Major in English Literature, New York University
Served as author at Media for Humanity
Skilled in datamining on student’s background and creating personalized application stories

Kenny L

Essay Tutor

Major in Civil Engineering & Industrial Engineering, New York University
Proficient in multiple languages
Former Co-founder of Peekbite, Inc

Our Service

Essay Revising

Essay types

PS, RL, Cover letter, Essay,Scholarship application

Duration

1-3 days

Services included

Revision by native tutor

Polishing the language + adjusting the logic

comments + suggestions on revision

Range of revision

final draft word count +-30%

Cost

¥900/page

If more than 300 words, the exceeding part will be charged at ¥2.5/word.

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CV Revising

CV types

English Resume or CV for the application for Master, Doctor and jobs

Duration

1-3 days

Services included

Revision by native tutor + comments from consultant with admissions experience

Highlight key points + optimize content + comments + suggestions on revision

Range of revision

final draft word count +-30%

Cost

¥900/page

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Service Process

Choose a service and submit first draft

Collect and fill out information for essay/resume, complete payment, submit first draft in Word document

Match with a tutor

According to the background and direction of the application, a professional native essay tutor will be matched with you. We will contact you in 1 workday after the payment.

One-on-one Communication

Students can communicate with CheersYou’s senior consultants online, which can ensure information transparency and timeliness.

Final Draft Delivery

The final draft will be sent to your email or WeChat after review, and you can continue to communicate with the tutor within 7 days after delivery.

Sample of Essay and CV

常见问题FAQ

- Students who are preparing a DIY application and have a specific school and major/program in mind.
- Students who have already finished writing the first draft of the English essay/CV and would like to have a professional team to polish the style.
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Essays for undergraduate applications focus more on personal qualities and thinking ability. Students with rich personal experience and extracurricular experience are more likely to stand out. Essays for postgraduate applications focus more on the professionalism of personal experience, and how their own experience fits the postgraduate program well. Applicants' scientific research and internship experience will be more valued in essays for postgraduate applications.
Each university, school and program may have different priorities when it comes to essay evaluation. Essay writing for some master’s programs is more challenging. An essay is an important channel in addition to their GPAs for admissions officers to get to know the students. To put it frankly, what the university wants to know more about is who you are, what your background is, where your strengths are? Good universities don't just want to see your test scores, but you as a human being.
1. Students can’t differentiate PS and CV and write PS as an extended version of CV
2. Students use only one essay to apply for different schools or even for different majors
3. The essay is long and tedious, with all the experiences typed in but no focus, let alone combining the characteristics of the school and the program
1. The most important prerequisite for writing an essay is to do enough preparation. To highlight your true enthusiasm, you need to do a comprehensive and detailed research on a specific program.
2. Take some time to think deeply and do a brainstorming. This process is the key stage for you to sort out the ideas of the essay. Don't simply just think about it in your head, but also write it down when you think about it.
3. Write an outline of the essay. Use bullet points and brief comments/statements to organize your previous ideas to effectively strengthen your central theme/topic.
4. Start writing a draft of your essay, mention yourself in positive language, give specific and concise examples, and pay attention to basic formatting issues.
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